"At the mall there was a seance, just kids no parents. Then the sky filled with herons." Watch out, Stephen King. Kanye might be trying to edge in on that horror genre. Needs a little work though. I suppose the mall is a classic American institution, which makes it ripe for horror novel or horror movie exploitation, but is it really a good place for a seance? How many people have died there? And herons? Like, the noble looking water-bird? A sky full of them sounds gorgeous. Also, and this is a quibble, but are we ok with "parents" and "herons" are rhyming words? Yes? We are? OK, carry on.