10 Screenwriting Lessons You Can Learn From Star Trek Into Darkness

2. Thwarted Plans Add Interest

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Quick, tell me, how many times is a plan perfectly executed in a movie? What€™s that I hear? Deafening silence? Yup. The reason is this: when things go perfectly well, they end up being kind of boring. There is no surprise in being told what is going to happen and then seeing it happen. It€™s almost like having a surprise birthday party spoiled for you. The shock comes when thinking you are going home to watch Game of Thrones when a grown man in a birthday hat suddenly jumps out from behind your couch.

Want to surprise the audience? Tell them something is going to happen, then mess it all up. Sure, the viewers probably know it can€™t go according to plan but they won€™t know exactly what interrupts everything. It€™s a classic bait and switch and it never gets old. Think of it as a set-up and a punchline. What€™s great is that once that unexpected problem hits your protagonist, the audience will have no idea what to expect. Another way to do this is to have an elaborate plan, only for the characters to find a much simpler, easy way to accomplish it.

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Ryan Estabrooks is a film writer/director and photographer. When he is not busy solving mysteries, he can be found working on his feature length film. You can view all of his work at the imaginatively-titled RyanEstabrooks.com